Fix my research by following the requirements. my research is about (Upper Cross syndrome).

the requirements. :

Can you please fix these five things :

• change the topic to (Upper cross syndrome)
• make the aim very clear and add some sentences to it
• Add the Resources .
• add Conclusion.
• you have to Change the way of writing from ( you, we , I or they )

To a third person ) for example

When you say ( it can happen any where from your ribs to your nick ) you should say ( it could happen anywhere from ribs to the nick )

I hope you understand what I mean ask me if you have any questions