Essay Analysis: Hamilton’s Local Democracy Is In Trouble. Adapted from an article by: Chris Erl From The Hamilton Spectator, Feb. 9, 2021.

If you are unfamiliar with Reddit, the best way to quickly describe it is to paraphrase the opening line of Charles Dickens’ A Tale of Two Cities: it is the best of times, it is the worst of times. Reddit serves as an online message board where people can share photos, ask for and provide advice and, as of late, share stock tips. The anonymity of the site can produce awful behaviour, but it can also bring out the best in people.
If you sift through all that digital clutter, you can find a space, or “subreddit,” for our incredible city. The message board called r/Hamilton has just under 40,000 members. This online community includes folks chatting about house prices, posting photos of the fall colours at the Devil’s Punchbowl, and sharing stories about our local history. I am sure it also includes more than a few very confused fans of a certain popular musical.
On Jan. 30, the moderators of r/Hamilton announced they had been contacted by Reddit’s legal department. Evidently, someone from city hall had noticed the message board’s icon was our city’s official logo; the six-pillared bridge, representing the six communities of Hamilton and visually similar to our city’s iconic High Level and Skyway Bridges. Rather than discuss this with the moderators, the city sent a trademark infringement complaint to Reddit.
Alone, this action may seem petty, pointless, even puerile. The city’s logo cost $600,000 of taxpayer dollars and is meant to symbolize our city, not simply brand a corporation, but a simple message could have addressed the issue. Instead, the city brought the hammer down. This cannot be considered in isolation, as it is just one in a long line of attempts to chill citizen engagement and widen the gap between city officials and residents.
Take, for example, the recent proposals floated at city hall surrounding letters submitted by residents. Council is deliberating whether to empower the city clerk to hold back letters critical of any councillor. Rather than these letters being part of the public record, they would be privately redirected to the integrity commissioner. While some letters submitted to council may be less-than-tactful, corresponding publicly and freely with our elected officials is a cornerstone of our democracy. Who benefits from withholding letters critical of elected officials—the officials, or the people they serve?
Then there’s the matter of what the integrity commissioner has actually dealt with this year. During this term of council alone, numerous high-profile complaints have landed on the desk of that office. Councillors have threatened journalists and residents, sent offensive and incomprehensible emails in response to questions, and have weaponized the office, turning it backward onto residents who had the audacity to speak their mind. This is not limited to city council, as trustees of the Hamilton-Wentworth District School Board were also targeted in a similar fashion by one of their colleagues for taking a stand against racism and discrimination.
All of these actions, taken together and combined with the culture of secrecy and antipathy toward the public that emanates from local institutions, are concerning. This is particularly worrisome from the perspective of a researcher like me who studies democratic institutions.
How healthy is democracy in Hamilton? Though exact figures and historical data are hard to find thanks to an institutional disinterest in detailed data-sharing and record-keeping, we know that voter turnout and engagement is low. This is understandable, as there are not many incentives to get involved in our local politics. Engaged citizens are berated by elected officials in meetings, on social media and over email when they participate. Actions as small as using the city’s logo or as visible as protesting for more affordable housing are met with swift and brutal backlash. Trustees operate in secrecy while councillors use language reminiscent of the conspiratorial and dangerous rhetoric advanced by those on the political fringe.
When we step back and consider the wider picture, it is evident that Hamilton’s local democracy is extremely unhealthy. Municipal politicians view the public with fear and resentment while residents struggle to have their voices heard and participate in their democracy without harm or hindrance. All this points to a need for a culture shift in Hamilton’s local politics. It is time to find common ground, drop the attitude of hostility, and welcome folks back into the conversation. At the very least, the city can start by giving r/Hamilton back the logo — a symbol of bridging divides — with an apology.

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