Editing, proofreading and rewriting. Be keen on the instructions below.

I have a document (4 pages or 1645 words) that would need your help. It’s a story about a new immigrant looking for jobs. The target audience is native English speakers. Below are the requirements:

1. This document/story needs to be edited/revised for native English speakers.
2. Its choice of words or phrases, grammar and structure etc need to be rewritten/rephrased to meet native speakers’ language level.
3. Elaborate the details by adding more details as needed in order to make the story vivid.